Soul Pressed Poetry

Poetry that comes from our soul.

child of light (28 Feb 2011)

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this child of light
can see the shadow in you
in perfect symmetry

and this child of light
can see when you indulge
that shadow

because the play distorts
the smoothness
turns slippery

and in a fraction of a second
he falls into your attention
and you become light

As he is

6 Comments

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  2. divine spirits..
    what a delightful read..

  3. the first line instantly draws me..
    very fine tuned work.

    welcome sharing your poetry with us, first time participants can share 1 to 3 old poems or poem unrelated to our theme.

    have fun today.

    keep up the excellence.
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    xx

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  4. Simple yet divine. Like your post!:-)

  5. sorry for missing this comment, now the collection is over,

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